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Princess Of The Green

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She set out every morning

did the Princess of the Green.

Hidden by the whirling mist

she was hardly seen.

She wore a dress of purple this day

around her feet two kittens did play.

The unbrella she carried was light

her tiney feet were hardly in sight.

Gliding along the brooks side

she found a toad intending to hide.

" Good Lady" the toad said with hesitation

"I know I am far beneath your station

but someone must love me

with out reservation.

If I am ever to live with in my station."

"Dear friend " said the Princess " you

have quiet a limitation.

I don't mind toads but you are

not among my presantions."

" Sweet miss you may remove my

curse with a single kiss."

Princess " I never thought my

 fame would come to this."

Princiss " Who left you with this curse?."

Tode " A stranger in the town,

 I fear he cold do worse."

Princess " I will grant you just one kiss

that will be the end of this."

The toad jumped upon the rock

the Princess kissed him lightly

what a shock.

Right before her eyes

 A perfect man did arise.

The Princess bowed and offered her hand

The man filled it full of sand

" I will not take you on comand." he said

She answered "I would not take you

if you were the last man in the land"

He said " would you take back your kiss"

she answered " I would take it." with a hiss.

The man was not a fool

he did not argue with ladies as a rule.

He said "I bid you adeiu."

She answered " I hate you to"

Of those like her there were few. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 22, 2009

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    A tale - some lore within - and nicely penned but really be sure that you always put your poetry through a spell checker just to make sure. This poem has great potential, has meaning that is contemporary and necessary. Ty for entering it!


  • Aalta
    November 20, 2009
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    a very well expressed poem... the clarity of narration is impressive
    a nice and pleasurable read...


    • Wickedruby1 gold member
      November 21, 2009
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      Princess Of The Green

      Thank you for reading about my little Princess and leaving a reply


  • NickRhyme
    November 19, 2009
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    Nice poem. I really like this one.

    • Wickedruby1 gold member
      November 21, 2009
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      Princess Of The Green

      Thanks for reading and leaving a nice review.

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