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Perfection

Watching the lightning illuminate the sky,
Memories of long ago evaporate with the water of the ocean in front of us,
The gentle breeze making waves above the blue depths that hold such mystery.
This is where we first let our feelings show those months ago,
Never letting anything get in our way to ruin such perfection,
And as the thunder makes it's appearance,
The clouds open up to let the crystals fall,
Then once again i'm in your arms safe from the harsh reality of the world around us,
That can never touch us. 

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  • loche
    January 12
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    You surprise me with each turn.


  • paul claxton
    November 21, 2009
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    beautiful


  • Darc Eclipse
    November 19, 2009

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    11 Thumbs Up!

    the verdict is because that's how i roll, the poem well its indescribable, it was my exact feeling when you were in my arms last night and hopefully a similar occurrence will be tonight. love you tam xoxo and thankyou ever so much