Heart embraced
breath through my soul
as I nurture yours
A contest entry
- in seven words of sin or ten words of desire. by CentrifugalCorpse.
1000 points, ended December 6, 2009, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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as always you are able to pen well with so few words
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the words you have crafted from this one like fine wine, they are intoxicating, wonderful done, keep it flowing
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How one man can write ten words that are so beautiful and so ful of meaning is far beyond me! Breathtaking is the only thing I can think of
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oh my gosh these words are so beautiful! In ten words you captured the hearts of women everywhere! Best of luck in the contest
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wow
Very short. And sweeeeet
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Stunningly beautiful, Robin! Your Muse has been working overtime lately, and it certainly shows! Such beautiful emotion expressed in so few words. Absolutely beautiful!
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Wow. Beautiful, hon. Another masterpiece. you never stop to amaze me.
Good luck, good job, and keep writing!!
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