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Lilac Thoughts



Laundry day not the favorite for this
Intelligent and creative lady
Lingering in lilting thoughts and phrases
Always take precedence and
Careful consideration must take place to attend to daily chores!

This beyond dispute
Her rhyming is astute
Over all in artistry
Undisputed in repute
Generous and kind
Her words express her mind
Tenderly reveals her heart
She’s truly quite a find!

Author notes

I so admire this lady's art in word & backgrounds!

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  • grannyeri gold member
    November 29, 2009

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    Way to go getting bronze in this contest - easy to read and understand this acrostic poem. Fitting poem for this special lady.


    • Kathleen a Nazarene
      November 29, 2009
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      I don't really know Lilac, but when I took a gander at her art & poetry I felt as though I knew her & this poem is what transpired.


  • Lady Altheia
    November 29, 2009

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    I really love the acrostic. These poems will make Lilac pleased as punch. Thank you for taking the time to participate in the contest. Best of luck to you in your future writes.

    • Kathleen a Nazarene
      November 29, 2009
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      BTW....I just noticed you gave me a Bronze! TY.


    • Kathleen a Nazarene
      November 29, 2009
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      I'm glad to know you liked my poem. I've grown to love acrostics & they are among my fav form. Lilac & purple are my favorite colors & I think Lilac was named well. She's an amazing artist & this is what I was inspired to write about her.


  • H4rd Kisses
    November 20, 2009

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    The rhyming and alitteration in the piece were very nice. It flowed smoothly to read and was very enjoyable. For some reason it really reminds me of my mother lol. Very good job and thanks for sharing!

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