Laundry day not the favorite for this
Intelligent and creative lady
Lingering in lilting thoughts and phrases
Always take precedence and
Careful consideration must take place to attend to daily chores!
This beyond dispute
Her rhyming is astute
Over all in artistry
Undisputed in repute
Generous and kind
Her words express her mind
Tenderly reveals her heart
She’s truly quite a find!
Author notes
I so admire this lady's art in word & backgrounds!
A contest entry
- Bandit Mid-Month November Contest by Lady Altheia.
700 points, ended November 29, 2009, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How'm I doing?
Comments
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Way to go getting bronze in this contest - easy to read and understand this acrostic poem. Fitting poem for this special lady.
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I don't really know Lilac, but when I took a gander at her art & poetry I felt as though I knew her & this poem is what transpired.
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I really love the acrostic. These poems will make Lilac pleased as punch. Thank you for taking the time to participate in the contest. Best of luck to you in your future writes.
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BTW....I just noticed you gave me a Bronze! TY.
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I'm glad to know you liked my poem. I've grown to love acrostics & they are among my fav form. Lilac & purple are my favorite colors & I think Lilac was named well. She's an amazing artist & this is what I was inspired to write about her.
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The rhyming and alitteration in the piece were very nice. It flowed smoothly to read and was very enjoyable. For some reason it really reminds me of my mother lol. Very good job and thanks for sharing!
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for your read & nice compliment. I
your eyes!
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