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You are Exceptional

To say, “Happy Birthday,”
    is just like an ordinary greeting,
    and I know, you are a unique person,
    to everyone you have met here at AP;
So this particular tribute from me to you,
    is like saying,” You’re my good friend, too.”
    “Shush,” not because you always give me,
    Gold, silver, bronze or green trophies.         

You’re one of the best poets I like
    Who share his distinctive talent to all,
    Your faith is your good virtue,
    Your talent is a gift, He gave you.
You can write something ordinary,
    But when we read it, it's extraordinary.
    Yes, my friend, you are exceptional,
    And I hope, your birthday will be special.     



©summer52, November 20, 2009

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Your faith is your good virtue,
Your talent is a gift, He gave you,
Because God loves you so much,
He made you a SPECIAL ONE.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY on the 23rd, November, 2009…. !


summer52

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 21, 2009

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    Ah..you touched me by the touching words and by the sentiments honestly shared throught he wonderfusl words..love it..and yes I must convey to you many many thanks for sharing this to me..


    • Summer52
      November 29, 2009
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      My sincerest thanks, though this is so late reply.

      You're always welcome, kind sir.