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Let Her Know

Can't you see it...
The giggling and smile.
Can't you see,
The smile and the blush.

She shines everytimes you're around
She blush just thinking of you
She knows you see it
So let her know

She move, she shake, she pops
And she does it with you
Now she wants to drop and lock it
And she wants to lock it with you
Let her know already

With a racing heart
A blinding smile
A warm hug
And sweet crimson lips
She is waiting on you

So let her young heart know

Author notes

i wrote this for my friend bcuz she liked this guy but he was oblivious about it

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  • Montey gold member
    1 day ago
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    This is really good.Amazing how obvious it can be to you and others, yet the guy can be oblivious.Well expressed here.


  • wander of the sky
    February 7
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    this is so loving and so sweet


  • Little Lesley
    February 6
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    This is such a powerful write for a friend. Your friend would be so pleased and proud of you. Absolutely great write.

    My favourite lines are these ones -


    "With a racing heart
    A blinding smile
    A warm hug
    And sweet crimson lips."

    And my favourite stanza is this one -

    "With a racing heart
    A blinding smile
    A warm hug
    And sweet crimson lips
    She is waiting on you."

    So the lines and the stanza kind of fits together. Great job!