Following an issue down the spectrum
The end of my defiance
Swallowing whole the rusted anger that intrudes
Caught behind these steel drowning bars
Injustice, scattering confusion
Have'nt we already swallowed thier reasons?
My mind runs rampid
filling me with frustrated rage
On another dead worn path I'll graze
Lying its fowl head upon my grave
Anomosity
The fear within is eroding
filling in the blanks
I run so intentionaly behind these chains
Is it God that has embraced my neck with fear
to adhere by anothers light?
Put upon my ever fading shadow
From behind me
there is another face scattering abroad my path
contempt for the light we expose
What is sacred to the eye
rather than to make a fraud of a momentary line
This ever fading
death devouring concept
haunting eager prolonged time
Comments
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your a really good writer.
i like allyour stuff so far.
very intense and full of emotion.
keep writing.
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nice ^_^ - though in this line "Have'nt we already swallowed there reasons" .... shouldnt it be "thier" .. instead??.. english is not my 1st language so if i am wrong.. then i am sorry.. but a very good poem non-the-less

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Awesome.
This is cool.
keep writing!!



