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Were going through changes

I suppose i should have seen it,
the timings been just right,
the sands of time are changing,
and once more you want me to fight.

Waiting for our love to come this time,
waiting for our love to last,
like we wait for the flowers in springtime,
but eventually they are outcast.

I can not wait any longer,
for the flowers in springtime to grow,
as i can't wait for your love anymore,
the time for this change has been shown.

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I'm sorry, i just can't be hurt again.

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  • Nikonic Freak silver member
    November 18, 2009
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    This is sad...But I empathize. I too have felt this. and it SUCKS. :[
    You did an awesome job writing about it, though.


  • nekoxchik
    November 18, 2009

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    this is really beautiful you dont need to change a thing