It’s over
& I just can’t help
but look back and wonder
what the hell was I thinking?
It all seemed good for a while,
sharing all those loving smiles
and laughter ripping out the seams
and talking together at night
bringing lovely dreams.
But then it all turned upside down,
him stringing me along
just because he can
and he’s just plain stupid
not worth the title
of being called a man
He’ll be missing out
on this heart of gold
and treasures untold
like chocolate chip cookies
fresh from the oven.
But then again,
he didn’t like chocolate anyways.
Maybe I should’ve known from the start
to never ever trust someone
who has a dislike for chocolate.
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Some things you just can't control
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not worth the title
of being called a man
I like those lines the best.
This feels all too familar.
But seriously...someone who doesn't like chocolate?
Thanks for entering.
Síochán leat
~Mairéad~
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Chocolate 4Life
wow wow woow..someone hates chocolate? Cannot grasp my mind around that..he must be lying. lol..but seriously? Someone who hates chocolate can hardly be called human. (In this case it works..sorry to those you dont like it either)
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Hate's Chocolate?
That's inconceivable... Anyway. You know how I feel about this situation. You're better off without him, and now, while you're feeling like maybe it wasn't the best thing to do, or that you didn't want to do it, you will soon know that it was for the better in the long run.
You'll be ok kid, and like i always says, there are too many guys out there waiting, for you to harp too much on one that's not even worth your time!
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