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Madrical

A seed gently placed in the soil
tender hands pat it down

everyday he comes to water
and earnesly waits for a sign of life

patiently, waiting, he sits by the sill
watching, dreaming, waiting for a bloom

people todl him to give up, dont wait
why wait for somthing so far away?

dismissed, were thier words
he knew she would come

and it began to bloom
first, small and tender

he watched her constantly
care, he rained on her

slowly but surly a bud began to sprout
and it soom became a flower, full of life and love

he carressed teh flower adn breathed her in
his patience was rewarded a beauty the bloomed from within

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