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My Guardian.

When he caught me
I didn't know
My world was already upside down
Colors; the most beautifulest ones
seemed so dull and without life
I was locked in my shadow,
Stuck in a maze, and hiding behind a broken shield
Nothing made me feel so much of life
until I knew he was beside me
knowing when he came in my shadow
he held a light brighter then the sun,
that we he came in the maze
he remembered the way out,
and that when I let him behind my shield
he didn't say anything about my scars
but helped me repair and support my shield
He brought color back into the world
and hope into my heart
He showed me
That love heals, lights the path, and supports you
I was caught,
I was saved
by My Guardian

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I am not good at writing poetry, but this came from my heart.
I love you.

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  • The Blond Romeo
    December 19, 2009

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    I loved it

    It was great Rae, i really liked it. Poetry is only ever very good when it comes from the heart like this. I hope everyone is able to find their guardian like you found yours.


  • Salem-Shizukuni
    December 4, 2009
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    aya!

    this was great!!!!!