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Broken Promises

Fuck your promises
Your broken unkept words

I take them in
Believe them
Only to be let down

I won’t do this anymore
I won’t be so vulnerable
Your words…
Will be only words

Lies…
And half truths…
But never real.
So fuck your promises
Your broken unkept promises

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  • starving4perfection
    November 18, 2009

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    WOW thats such an honest poem
    i can understand how your feeling....people are like that everyone chats a load of bollocks!
    'Lies…
    And half truths…
    But never real.
    So fuck your promises
    Your broken unkept promises'
    thank you for entering and good luck!