Niki
my friend
where did you go
why did yu
leave me here with no hope
niki
come back
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A strong longing in this poem it is clear in content I do not know how others will take the way you spell It does not bother me, but I am just one person.
Also I would add a little more to this while it has a strong base it needs to add some color and a little more to lead the reader. You are smart poetically I can tell
but you are too obscure in this poem. A little mystery is good making the reader work, but too much and you lose them
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so what do you suggest i add
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i know its hard.. and its impossible to get over. Some people have told me that (after i lost 3 of my closest friends a year ago) to stop crying, get over it, and stop mourning. But I don't listen to them.
She'll always be in your heart and the hearts of many other people. And the most important thing is to let her live on in your heart and in your memories.
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im so sorry dan.
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I know it's hard to lose a friend.
I lost her and she was my twin sister.
She was the closet friend I had since
birth. The only one I had when people
left me to die. Left me with no hope.
Just so you know she did leave you a letter
that I just recently found.
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i no u no
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I miss her as well.
I knew her for almost
15 years just like her
twin. I know the pain
you are going through.
I wonder where she
went as well.
Amazing write
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i am sorry that you lost your friend, i wish i had words but i think in time you will found those yourself, til then keep it flowing
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it wont get better....ever
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short words but there so strong
i hope what ever is going on gets better
&& things brighten up;
love mucho
-vanna
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its been over 6 months now and it still aint better
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aw i'm sorry sweetie
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