Three young lives,
sadly taken away,
no one possibly saw it coming,
that cold November day
An innocent child,
abused by his father,
what could've been prevented,
was to much of a bother
How could this man,
hurt his child so bad,
just leaving him broken,
beat up and sad
Having good friends,
to take him away from his pain,
by the hand of his Dad,
a monster no one could restrain
Desperately trying to save their friend,
their lives came to a tragic end,
for a drunk driver behind the wheel,
inflicted wounds that never would heal
This poor boys life ended in horror,
couldn't be saved,
from his own father
Three brave young friends,
who always stuck together,
now in God's hands,
live in our hearts but gone forever
Author notes
prompt: wrote about the story
A contest entry
- A year's gone past but the pain still remains by xxvampyregirlxx.
1000 points, ended December 3, 2009, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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how sad is this taken on a rescue mission gee thats harsh brilliant pen tho im all sad now bless you
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Very good poem....it was filled with emotion and depression...well done
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An intense , poignant and evocative write !
Skillfully expressed and touches an emotional
cord each line ! Thank you for sharing today ..
A pleasure indeed to read ...
Best wishes & hugs , friend Easy
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amazing.. i love it and its just.. the whole thing is sad its even worse that i knew them i kinda wanna cry now. i love it thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest
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