the sky
burning down tonight
as we hear them cry
the sky
burning down tonight
the red sun
would come above
the sky
burning
the stars
died
the black sky
now
burning
burning
to ashes
to smoke
the sky,
burning down tonight
as i bleed,
moon is red
the sun has arrived
burning us all down
our sins are burning
we shall burn tonight
darkness
fill the
heart
like
night
to sky
no dream no bounds
no one to hold
no one to fly!!!!
please
wake me up
before i change
ashes all around,,,,
Author notes
just experimenting... trying to kick off my writing. being very dull lately
What do you say??
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Shriek !!!
This is scary.
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good one
my own poem "The Burning heart" was an insipirtion to read your one. A very nice imagination.
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Knock knock
Wake up :-) Nice experiment, enjoyed reading- very artfully written, imagery of burning sky alongwith panicked self very nice, well done!
Regards,
Mou
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hey amnouup.... thanks a lot dear for your kind comment
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Bravo
Though so sad, but full of emotions. Heartfelt. I did feel a big sadness but genuine. Well done!
I like it
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