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Secret Agent



I am a Secret Agent man,
my work is like no other.
I do my best work at night,
and in winter under cover.

I respond to calls of desperation,
receiving stress and tension .
The work I do is top secret,
and the names I will not mention.

So if you  need relief of tension,
and your climbing up the wall.
Remember your Secret Agent,
just stop and give me a call.


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  • Adamastor
    November 21, 2009

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    It's Good. Not great, but good.

    It's worth a score of 2 to me, but I can't afford to actually give you 2 but I will give you one. That's in score terms, not sexual terms please. Anyway, It was a prompt which means you wrote it quite quick, so that's why it's a 2 rather than a one. Please rest assured, that although I am only giving it a score of 1, due to the unfortunate circumstances of me being new and not having a lot of points, your poem IS a score of 2.


  • condor gold member
    November 21, 2009

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    AaaaH, such a nice write and one which got my humour buds tingling alright. I like the tight rhyme you used here and how it all flowed so well and told a little story without too much detail. Very well done. Thank you so much for entering and I wish you the very best in the contest.

    • Beret55 silver member
      November 21, 2009
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      Thanks Lee. But i've been retired for a while. hehe


  • ea silver member
    November 20, 2009

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    Is it really such a secret?


  • Sandygram silver member
    November 18, 2009

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    S.O.S.


    This was so cute. Hugs my friend.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    November 18, 2009

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    This is quite cute, my friend
    Very much enjoyed reading this one!
    All the best to you in this contest, hon
    Hugs,
    Sandy


  • ShaShay
    November 18, 2009

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    You will be the first person I call..........LOL.
    Wonderfully writen, with a tongue-in-cheek feel.
    Sharon

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