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Can't Sleep

I lay awake thinking of you
Not able to sleep brings back memories of your touch and kisses
Your lips so sweet and soft
I can’t sleep at night
Because you hunt my mind

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  • crivanea
    November 17, 2009

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    it does sound quite painful...is it the though that consumes the mind? or the fact that not being able to be w/ him/her that hurts the mind? or perhaps it's the fact you are unable to sleep..multiple interpretation in this