I'm still hurting because of you
Not that you would care
But I can still feel your fingers
Lingering in my hair
My heart expands
When I see you in my mind
I try not to think of the bad times
Only the times you were kind
My heart is aching
And I can't make it stop
Into a million pieces it is breaking
A morbid pile of slop
Author notes
22)"Falling To Pieces" ~Thornley
A contest entry
- Are You Musically Inspired? by BloodyCrystalEmbers.
800 points, ended December 10, 2009, 6 entries
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Comments
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A sad write.
Best wishes,
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I relate to this piece, I think we all know the feelings you write/speak of...losing a love we thought was pure can hurt to the very core, I think you showed that through your words well...great honest emotion, I really enjoyed this for what you made it...often times something beautiful can come from something tragic and I think your poem is just that. Thanks for entering it, and best of luck in the contest
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beautiful i have felt that way to
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