Why is it so hard
For me to let you go
Your always one my mind
Even as my heart screams no
I thought you'd never find someone
But I guess I was wrong
I see your true colors now
I can't believe it took me this long
Your nothing but an addict
A junky from the Sunny Side
Everything will end badly
And your brain will be fried
Not that it really matters
Because you were never that smart
But if I had the choice
I'd rip your world apart
A contest entry
- The Bastard Has No Idea What He's Missing. by Random Goldfish.
700 points, ended December 6, 2009, 17 entries
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Comments
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sometimes that is how they make us feel.......nice flow.....gr8 write.....keep quilling......love peace & harmony
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But if I had the choice I'd rip your world apart...
I like those lines.
I'm certain I couldn't be that way to my guy though...he is a nice guy...just a serious case of "no balls"
I love the rhyme in this; it flowed effortlessly.
Thank you for entering this into my contest.
Síochán leat
~Mairéad~
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