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You and your shovel

Every girl wants a guy with a twinkle in his eye and a swagger in his step.
A guy who talks the talk and walks the walk,
A sappy romantic, spilling all the same old lines to all the girls.

A guy with a firm grip and strong kiss and a sly wink,
he's gone in a blink.
  He Knows All The Right Lines
                         All The Right Moments
He's storybook perfect, he lets you know you're worth it.

What about the guy who can't speak those lines,
but instead speaks his mind. He walks with a strong stride although he's shy.

He's unrehearsed, not spilling lines verse for verse,
he won't tell you what you want to hear,
might not make his feelings clear,
but if he lets you near.. you're a keeper.
             He might not know the best ways.
                                     He has good days, and bad days
                                                                     But he's himself.

At least when you need him he's there,
tries his best to let you know he cares.

He may dig himself a lot of holes with that shovel of his but he always manages to climb out.

What are your thoughts???

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  • VampireKitty-
    November 18, 2009
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    Good job Grey awesome write...it's very well written i like it.keep it up


  • XxLove.She.LostxX
    November 18, 2009

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    This made me smile...i loved every line and i agree with it 100% most girls go after the guy who doesnt care and only tell them what they want to hear for one reason...but always pass over the guy that actually cares about them and only trys to make them happy...great job once again lol keep it up!


  • Tzipora
    November 17, 2009

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    What about the guy who can't speak those lines,
    but instead speaks his mind. He walks with a strong stride although he's shy.

    - wtf. this is brilliant ! bookmarked!


  • fake-or-real-smile
    November 17, 2009

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    i LOVVVVVVE this!

    The first line caught my attention and it was definitely worth the read!

    Says it all reallly.... those guys that can't talk the talk and walk the walk tend to be more worth it than those that can. I've met one who can talk the talk like an expert but hasn't quite managed the walk yet!

    Love the last line:
    "He may dig himself a lot of holes with that shovel of his but he always manages to climb out."

    For some odd reason it made me smile.

    Well done. Great write

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