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Threesome







Paul's skin shrunk to wrinkles
she stroked his muscular body
that resembled more like a tree
trunk barren of its leaves
a crunch satisfied her ears


She marvelled at the frozen statue
of Mark, her fingers moulded to the
ice that even his fiery soul couldn't
penetrate through
she breathed in his open mouth







Don't get too close.







Author notes

I give credit to the picture. Sorry, this isn't one of my best, hope it made sense.

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  • islekine
    November 17, 2009

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    Very out of box!

    Thanks for entering! Best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on...

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  • mgmc gold member
    November 17, 2009

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    Very creative and out of the box take on the prompt in a short period of time! Well written! All the best in contest!


  • penman gold member
    November 17, 2009

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    Wonderful

    Wow, what a take on the picture. So very creative. Best of luck in the contest