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You were my everything

You made her the happiest person in the world.
You told her everything she wanted to hear.
She always thought you were the one.
The one she wanted to be with til the end of time.
But little did she know,
You were exactly like every other guy.

You built set her up to destroy her.
Her hearts now broken and barely beating.
Can you hear her silent screams that she holds behind her bloodshot eyes?
And one day I hope you realize,
You were her everything.

She's afraid to stick her heart back out.
Love's like a game to all these guys.
Every guy she really wants is just another heart breaker,
Waiting to fill her head with endless lies.


You built set her up to destroy her.
Her hearts broken now,
And she can barely breath.
Can you hear her silent screams that she holds behind bloodshot eyes?
And one day I hope you realize,
You were her everything.

And through all the pain,
Through all the tears,
You are still the only thing she sees.
As she places the cold blade to her pale wrist,
Still thinking of that night you broke her heart,
A single mascara stained tear rolls down her chick.
She won't be in pain anymore.

You built set her up to destroy her.
Her hearts broken now,
And she can barely breath.
Can you hear her silent screams that she holds behind her bloodshot eyes?
And one day I hope you realize,
You were her everything.

You built me up to destroy me...
My hearts broken now...
And I can barely breath.
Can you hear my silent screams that I hold behind my bloodshot eyes?
And one day boy I hope you realize.
You were my everything.

Author notes

I actually found this in my notebook that I take to school with me every day for when i get bored and write poems. It's from like forever ago about one of my real life ex's who i still to this day to hate.

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  • awannabepoet
    November 21, 2009

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    Awe Jan, try not to carry hate around with you its not healthy but I know the feeling even If I am supposed to be older and wiser.

    Great poem sweetie.

  • blindandproudofit
    November 18, 2009

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    i liked how you kept repeating stuff it made it more powerful. especially at the end where you changed back to the first person. good job keep up the good work.


  • VampireKitty-
    November 17, 2009

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    WOW..this was awesome it could be a song..really good write i loved it..it has a great flow and ryhming..i love reading your poems keep it up vamp


  • ForeverGiggles
    November 17, 2009

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    holy wow this is good.
    i like how you express the emotion
    very nice write

    ~Renee

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