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Crazy For Clam I Am

For clams I clamor
Stamp my feet and yammer
Do it even louder
When I want clam chowder.

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Written April 17th, 2004

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  • Sarah957
    March 24, 2008

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    This makes me think of a seal demanding his treat. I dont know why. I will give you some clam chowder if you roll over and bark now. LOL


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 24, 2008
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    Lol hehe good. All the best in the contest with it


  • Tamera
    May 25, 2007
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    LOL truely funny


  • applepie1254
    April 19, 2004
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    LoLoLoL very funny yet strangely weird. im guessing u like clam showder, so do i ^^''' neva though bout writing a poem bout it lol nice subject ^^'' yeh so kewl funni poem n keep up da kewl work!


    ~erika~

    ~ya eva have a spare momentz would u mind reading/reviewing one of ma poems or if u want i have a contest u can enter~

  • Billbard silver member
    April 17, 2004
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    mistysaint.It is not a limerick,which has 5 lines.Just a silly Quatrain.Thanks for nice comment.Bill


  • April 17, 2004
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    rofl I love the rhyme to this ..not sure, but is this a limerick? Hmmm if not it should be Have yaself a nice big bowl of chowder and enjoy your day


  • Sharon91gt
    April 17, 2004
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    odd! lol

    ???um...ok. Clam chowder makes you feel that way? ok, i'm going to appluade you-i don'r know why! lol!!! odd-so ur unique! so good! lol

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