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incomplete is my story to you

the road I walk, tried and true

the pain from my eye black and blue

Twas the moment I realized I was screwed

but like a knife in my heart you came

like a lover's fantasy enthralled in fame

from mourning's hour to morning's grace

I felt the tear drop fall from my face

it was a bastard hour the night I born

the heartless pierce from a naked thorn

but thrust myself from the demon seed

and cursed me from the terrible deed

lay me now, my head in shame

a curdisy from the demons of fame.

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