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Crisp laundered pillow case fades...
Imagining the scent of his skin still lingering there next to her
Breathing becomes a vicious reminder of yet another day
                     


                                alone.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 17, 2009

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    makes me happy that i am not like that, at least i don't think i am. mainly cause i don't have any reminders like that to haunt me. but then again i do have my memories that come even without the scent, keep it flowing


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    November 16, 2009

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    Awww hun this is such a sad write, it leaves me feeling as empty as your loss has left you. This is such a powerful write and I felt the punch to my heart. This has brought tear's to my eyes, and I am so sorry for your pain. Powerful write as always.


  • lyricist
    November 16, 2009

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    i hae that feeling. i been caught doing that a few times. smelling the scent from her body that laid there so long ago. and the thought of being alone. so few lines but so many more thoughts and feelings. deep indeed this write is


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 16, 2009

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    aaww..

    i hate that this is so sad my friend, very powerful few lines, i can felt the loniness and longing in this piece..


    • karma-n-peace
      November 16, 2009
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      Thanx, it's just the time of year and will once again pass, I am okay, really, but thank you for your comment and your support.
      x 100000000,000000000.....


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 16, 2009

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    LONELY AND SAD

    It is so difficult losing someone you love. I have had to come to grip with loss which was very painful in my early years and older ones also. Never easy and time has a way of easing the pain a little. 's


    • karma-n-peace
      November 16, 2009
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      I am waiting, in fact I have been waiting paitnetly for time to do its magic with this pain but still it seems as if I am ignored by this thing people call "time."

      Thank you so much sweetheart, it means a lot that I have support here at AP.

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