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call me sunshine, baby, maybe joy.



so sometimes
sometimes,sometimes
i am thinking;

"this man,
he does not want
the truth"
and i would be
no use to him
if  i gave it.

it would be
cruel, really, because
he just wants to
see me as amber.as sarahmargaretelizabeth.
he just wants to kiss
and forget
my existence.

and i just
want the same.

so i will be a name
we can both
be happy with.

Author notes

to tell the truth,

A contest entry

be honest. I won't put you on my ignore list. :)

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  • darell
    November 18, 2009

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    Interesting

    This is different from anything I
    would imagine on the subject of
    why women lie. still it was intriguing.


  • crivanea
    November 16, 2009

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    interesting been reading quite a bit of form poetry lately..so it's good to come back to some free verse..this is nice ...simple..but honest..wordings that show elegance in its clarity

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    November 16, 2009
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