silver glows the moon
lighting strands of cobwebs
that quiver to the touch.
Dreaming while dawn`s left hand
faded the night
I heard you softly breathing
in the silence of that quiet place
under the starlight.
Whispering love eternal
and forever in your ear
you awakened, stirred slightly.
while the fading moonlight still cast shadows
we walked at a brisk pace,
crossing gleaming streams
that reflected their shimmer in our faces.
And so, home together,
still in trance, entranced,
watching the dawn arrive,
dreaming of tomorrow
Author notes
W I L L I A M S T O W N Was waiting for our collaboration poem on Moonlight, but the word bank seemed to suit admirably.
A contest entry
- invite only round one by Serpentinsel.
900 points, ended November 18, 2009, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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yes dreamy like coldwater said and beautiful words. I wished men could think like this all the time very romantic and wonderful.. I really loved this.
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Very 'dreamy,' a wonderful atmosphere to the poem, and with such imagery, it felt like a black and white film. (hope that makes sense.)
Regards.
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this is a beautiful poem thanks so much for entering. you have a score of 91 keep that in mind!!!
good luck best wishes
claire
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thank you for entering i have viewed your poem you have 24 hours to change whatever you like.
claire
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