And the tears fall as I watch the memories fade away
Everything special we once had, slowly drowning into the darkness.
Staring blankly outside from a shattered window
All hope just seems to fade away along with my shadowed life itself.
As I look from outside the window, leaves falling to the ground
I watch my life fade away into abandoned pieces before my very eyes.
Author notes
Prompt: Outside the window.
10 lines or less. It'll probably say more but that's 'cause of the spaces 
I hope you like. <3
A contest entry
- Quickie # 20 of 37! Mystery Title Prompts by Beautiful-N-Broken.
460 points, ended November 17, 2009, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is how I feel..
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great job with the prompt and all around well writen. you have painted a very vivid picture here with your words. bravo and the best of luck to you in this contest.
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Thanks very much for the comment
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Terrific!
You did an amazing job with this and did very well with the prompt. I loved this because it felt like something I could have written at one point or another in my life. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. -
Than by all means close the curtains!
I like the feel, despite the lighthearted feel of what my initial response was.
The poem was on the whole a work of art.
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Thanks 
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Your prompt is...
Outside the window...
Use it how you like, anything goes.
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