Neverlasting dreams, scorned visions of unclaimed triumph
Inner peace, tranquillity lost
Gone in a flash like the twinkle of a star
Hence the lost memories , a dream gone wild
Twightlight seems near, yet remains so far
Serenities beauty falls like the prey of indiscretions
I wish to be at peace within mine soul
Dawn of a new era, hinesight hidden beneath wants
Oblivion blurrs my inner spirit, blinding me of truth
Ne're there be a god to answer my plea
To help me remember what's wrong or what's right
Restless cinders beneathe my weary bones
Estrogen takes pride in passion, straying my heart forlorn
May unforgetable tales become my woken dreams
Ending fires of my confusing state
Me and me alone, with all my capable tosses and turns
Brevity shall overcome and sences shall become surreal
Eternity of of forgotten realms, forgotten moments
Remembrance is not a revelation for me and I remain but a forgetful dream.....
Author notes
NIGHTS I DON'T REMEMBER--An Acrostic
A contest entry
- Quickie # 20 of 37! Mystery Title Prompts by Beautiful-N-Broken.
460 points, ended November 17, 2009, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It Should've Been Golden, I Swear by Heavenly Angel.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nicely done
I can tell a lot of thought went into this
Thank you for sharing and good luck to you!
Heavenly -
Unforgettable Online Angel
Hi Haleigh Grace...
You have always been an intellectually philosophical poet with wisdom beyond your years that shines with grace and still are. 
TEXAS SIZED HUGGING PRAYERS
UR AP mom,
SEA angel
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I love the last line of this, it really brings the entire write together. You did an excellent job with the prompt but I do ask that you place the prompt in your author notes. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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Your prompt is...
Nights I don't remember....
Use it however you like. Anything goes!
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