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Rapid Motion

A little bit of understanding
A little bit of care
A little bit of guidance
Taking me elsewhere
A little bit of truth
A little time to grow old
A little bit of attraction
Watch the story unfold
It brings me back to you
It's sad but true
Time can't stop what love can do
It keeps bringing me back to you

I watch the hour hand tick by
World is in rapid motion
The sun dances by and now the moon illuminates the sky
And the stars dance around now
It looks like a thousand fireflies
Everything is blurred and I don't care
I still know where I am at and you're with me there
I reach out to touch them and they scatter about
The sky bends over, cracking a smile
Time is in rapid motion for right now
And I don't care if it ever slows down

A little bit of understanding
A little bit of care
A little bit of guidance
Taking me elsewhere
A little bit of truth
A little time to grow old
A little bit of attraction
Watch the story unfold
It brings me back to you
It's sad but true
Time can't stop what love can do
It keeps bringing me back to you


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(¸.ˇ´ (¸.ˇLacey~

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  • whisper estonada
    November 17, 2009

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    This was absolutely amazing...it flowed beautifully. I'm without words it was that well written. Great, great job! This is what poetry is about.


    • Lacer
      November 18, 2009
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      thanks for reading and commenting. it really means a lot to me