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Because...

I love you
because you love me
because we both see
that we're meant to be
because you love me
because I love you
because we both do
what comes naturally

And all the tears I've
ever cried in sorrow
will wash away in
tears of joy tomorrow

I love you
because you love me
it's a guarantee
what a match we'll be
because you love me
because I love you
because love this true
must be destiny

Whenever bullshit
make me feel frustrated
I think of you and
once more I'm elated

I love me
because you love me
because we'll both be
so much more as "we"
because you love you
because I love you
and we'll love right through
all eternity

I spent so long
depressed and in denial
but now there's you
and all I do is smile

You love me
because I love you
because we both grew
into one not two
because I love you
because you love me
we'll keep love's decree
and live blissfully
because I love you
because you love me
because we both see
that we're meant to be
because you love me
because I love you
because we both do
what comes naturally






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A song... music to come soon.

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    January 6

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    And it all boils down to a never ending love...all encompassing love, eternal in scope...wonderful song of blissfilled love


  • mommymo silver member
    November 26, 2009

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    i think this will make a great song when you finish the music by the way i was reading what amera said you have a cd out where can i get one ok leave me a message about it you are a terrific writer i would love to here music from such a genius


  • Cynthia Gaines
    November 21, 2009

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    Wonderfully expressed...

    Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful song, I cannot wait to hear the musical score!! My best wishes to you always, and thanks again!!
    Peace,
    Cyn


  • poetryality silver member
    November 17, 2009

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    Oh I can't wait for the music. What a wonder you have sung with "love". Simply beautiful and ever so clever. I wish you well in the contest.


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee

  • Purrsanthema
    November 16, 2009

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    Beautiful! It will be delightful to hear how you craft this into music!

  • siahaan
    November 16, 2009
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    Happy One...
    Nicee


  • Amera gold member
    November 16, 2009

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    I still keep a CD of your music in my car and I just know that this love song will be beautiful. You have taken command of the devices of rhyme and epanaphora perfectly in this verse. Standing ovations. I’m thrilled to see you writing again.

    Love,
    Amera


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 16, 2009

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    Well.. I'd like to hear it sung that's for sure! Like the subtle wisdom in here.. but of course, I expect nothing less from you Sir!

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