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Lonely without you

Sometimes being with you
I feel so lonely
Some days I have what you
Text me as my company
Some days I go without
And honestly
It makes me doubt
If you really do love me
It's hard enough already with this distance
for instance
I can't hold you they way I'd like
I don't have the comfort of your arms
When I feel the need to cry
I need you to be there for me
The way I'm always waiting
To listen when You need to talk
I want to share with you
All the things I go through
And I want you to do the same
I can't be there for you
When you face hard times
And simply withdraw from everything
I get it I understand
Your sad right now
But can't you see
It's hurting me too
You are what keeps me centered
But your self isolation
Makes me feel like
Even the simplest of things
I'm incapable of doing for you
I get lonely too baby
Wont you pay attention to me
For more than just a few days

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  • okwriter94
    November 25, 2009

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    Thats really good. I like how you keep it flowing. very incredible writing.