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Empty-Minded.

I sit here dreaming of you,
While you dream of someone else.
I've gotten used to the pain,
The suffering you had caused.

Pictures of you fill my head,
And I know that I can't have you.
Nothing fills your head of me,
Because I mean nothing to you.

You hug me but only as friends.
While we embrace each other,
I wonder what you think of,
Because it's a pointless hug.

Torturing me just pleasures you so,
While it sickens me severely.
I want to be friends,
But you remind me of what we once had.

Please,
Leave my life for now.
I'd rather start off empty-minded,
Being empty-minded with no memories of us.

You should be happy without me,
Because you are not like me.
I wish you would be mine,
But just become empty-minded,
Empty-minded without the thoughts of me.

Start a new life,
Just one without me.

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Another poem for my stupid ex.

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  • longing4yourtouch
    December 21, 2009
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    Wow this one really hit home for me. i've been there so many times.

  • Odri Skye
    November 17, 2009
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    hmmmm....

    its sounds painful,i kinda sympathise with it.


  • Shilouette-Paradise
    November 16, 2009

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    I completely get what you mean in this poem. I felt it mostly with my first and third ex boyfriends. It's true, it's a good poem in general. You have a very clear view of how you feel of your ex, and i think you captured your thoughts well here. Great job, keep up the good work (:


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 16, 2009

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    "I sit here dreaming of you,
    While you dream of someone else.
    I've gotten used to the pain,
    The suffering you had caused." I've been there It's....blegh. Anyway, great job on this poem.


    -Steve-


  • finestbl0ndex3
    November 15, 2009
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    i reallly really like this & i can relate to it so much =/ & it stinks!

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