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I love you.......goodnight

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I sit up here before I leave ...I close my eyes
so very tight..My mind drifts away..
As I picture a bright and shinny day..
There you are..Standing not that far..
Your eyes so beautiful..Just like
two shinning stars..As you smile..
A very beautiful smile..My heart flies
for miles..As day quickly fades to night..
You grab my hand so very tight..We walk
on a moon lit beach..With the stars
shinning so bright..God this feels so
right..As we walk for miles holding hands..
We walk through the moist sand..
I turn my head..And see an angel..
I try to speak but my words are tangled..
As you softly speak into my ear..
I hear..Three words I hold so dear..
I open my eyes that I held so tight..
And my face and heart shines so bright..
As I say to my self I Love You...Goodnight.....


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Written April 16th, 2004

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