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My Love

What was it
That drove You
So wild, Babe?
Was it the way
I would dance
So soft & slow
Letting go
As the music
Flowed?

Was it the way
I walked
Having watched
My Mother
Sashay through life -
Keeping my Father
In love with and
Very interested
In His wife?

Was it my l          o          n          g
Blonde hair
Or my great legs?
Was it my tight
Firm breasts
Or the beauty
Of my symmetrical
Round face?

Could it have been
My eyes
That had You
So immobilized?

Or was it my touch
That meant so much?

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  • lovelifelive
    November 28, 2009

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    I love this it has a great flow an like everyone before me I am sure it was everything . Great read


  • Gabriel 848
    November 21, 2009
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    umm gulp all the above id say hell nice work hun


  • Mr.
    November 15, 2009

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    My guess is that it was a combination of all of those things.