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Hope

The rainbow
Dipping into golden water
Slowly soaking up trickles
The golden mercy we call hope

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A contest entry

I know it's short, just bare with me, okay?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    November 15, 2009

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    Wow, this is an awesome write!
    Excellent word choice, the metaphors and imagery just wonderful.
    Thank you so much for your entry and good luck to you!

    Geneva