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Crowning Song of Boa - Unfinished

When the river bows,
When it bends and sings.
When the river bows,
You are truely king.

When all nature dances,
At your feet.
You are queen forevermore,
forevermore.

Author notes

This just came to my mind when I was on the bus.
Probably one of my first poems

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