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My eyes are watering, tears cascading down pallid cheeks
like crystal raindrops  pouring from a grey cloud.
Their falling from all the lies, I've buried within my flesh walls
The burden these lies are creating upon me, is causing unbareable agony.
I want to make all this pain go away, so to release my demons
I cut criss cross slices upon my wrist and theighs, that will remain there forever.
I watch as my crimson blood flows to the floor
and feel a sigh of relief as some of my demons are released.

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  • ParadoxVictory85
    November 26, 2009

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    Painful excape, this part about grey lies making contraste sexual, tears me. Reminds me of a film the words are cinamatic, Yeah so umm rent the movie: "Return of the living dead 3"