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Her Preference



With my eyes locked,
on her half exposed cleavage
She looks at me
as if-
I’m some kind of pervert!
Over…        there
Mr. tall dark and handsome, smiles
she smiles…
as if-
she would love to show him more
she can have him!
I know,
she'll back… soon
and I-
will never give her, that chance,
for a second glance




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thinking to myself

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  • jinsays gold member
    November 22, 2009

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    yes you would, especially if the skirt and the legs are there. or maybe the right amount of more cleavage. love it, thank you.
    love,
    jin


  • Naughtygrlred
    November 18, 2009
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    Wow...


  • Almighty Aphrodite gold member
    November 15, 2009

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    LOL, I thought you were Mr. Tall, Dark and Handsome!

    I don't even raise my eyes to admire a handsome male specimen anymore--it seems that every single time I do, the guy will say hi or something out of a sense of obligation (since I paid him some attention) or because he feels sorry for me, since...apparently...I am not attractive enough to hold his attention. This stabs me in the heart because I have experienced said situation quite recently.

    I suppose that the men blessed with aesthetic perfection are too self-centered to learn how to have a heart...or a brain...that is open. Oh, well.

    Wishing you well in the contest...

    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora


  • Ethereal One gold member
    November 14, 2009

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    Powerful

    I love the message in your poem. She will find out Mr. tall, dark and handsome is so in love with himself that he could never love her. lol

    Good luck in this contest!

    Jeannette


  • PorcelainHope
    November 14, 2009

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    Haha, loved it, naughty and quite hilarious. Also, a creative take on Bukowski's piece.
    Good one!!


  • poetryality silver member
    November 14, 2009

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    Pfffftttt… Men and their roaming eyes, always wondering when they should be watching the lips to see what we have to say.

    Now Mal, I know you could take the aforementioned statement to different heights but you'd better not. Hahahaha I love it when you let us see inside your head. Gosh! Gotta watch the language and the puns. LOL

    Great! The best to you in the contest.


    Always with LOVE ♥

    Renee


  • Rowan gold member
    November 14, 2009

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    you naughty, naughty poet you. winks.

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