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Here is my life
To read and revise
Time goes by quickly
There's no time for lies

Why hate in vain
Of what was done yesterday?
There's no time for tomorrow
No time to betray

Why wallow in loneliness
In the result of bad terms?
Ties that were cut will be re-knotted
Knowledge lost will be learned

What's due will be due
Who despises will despise
But it's all about forgiveness
Living life on the other side

I am master of this moment
No greed, no war can take it from me
I can view beyond the border
Though there is nothing to foresee

All I have is now
And now is just fine
I live and I love
Today will be mine.

A contest entry

Honesty is my future's savior

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  • myusikah
    November 19, 2009
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    You should read my Today poem...I don't know when it was written, because now all my days seems like that one today, when it was a today. Now it's somewhere lost in yesterday, and I can't find that one today that I loved and was inspired by so much.


    • myusikah
      December 1, 2009
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      Now. I have a new tomorrow to look forward to. One that is similar to what was yesterday two days ago. I wish that many days of mine will be like that yesterday. I'm looking for it in my tomorrow, but I really want that to be today.


  • myusikah
    November 14, 2009

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    There's always a tomorrow...may not be a new tomorrow, like a whole day, but the future is in every coming second you live.

    -->pia♫♪


  • whits end silver member
    November 13, 2009

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    This was a good strong piece of work. I guess honesty is the future's savior. But what if there was no future?
    Best of luck in the contest!