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Gone_01

Never again will I experience the touch of your lips against my soft chocolate skin
Never will my body tremble with pleasure
as you undressed me with your eyes

From my corner
I stared across the dimly lit bedroom
the empty bed filled with memories of entwined bodies
I felt the walls closing in as I made my way toward the unkept bed
My aching body longing to be explored by you

I touched the soft pillow where your head used to lie
and remember the years of love I let slip by
Then
Reminisce………. rebirth
Ohh,
I miss you so much

Though I’ve found a man who loves me for me
My  passion for you still burns to the highest
Degree.

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Written April 16th, 2004

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