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Friction and Fraction

Bitter hot tears, scorching;
burning trails of writhing heat.
Coils of energy, combusting;
self hatred, putrid on my breath.
Self-destruction, in every action,
no longer caring for consequence;
all thoughts and procedures,
reduced to auto-pilot;
oblivious to any bearing or implication.
As I wreak on this pursuit of breakage,
not really caring, who's in the way;
a constant road of confusion,
set upon from the first day.
Something about me,
causing friction and fraction,
conflict and pain,
bloodshed throughout this, my ever-ending campaign.

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  • Ajdmommy silver member
    December 12, 2009
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    wow.. yes... causing friction and fraction. This was interesting.

  • Ajdmommy silver member
    December 12, 2009
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    wow.. yes... causing friction and fraction. This was interesting.


  • Jeb
    November 23, 2009

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    Ouch!

    Damn, this write screams with agony. It is well written, and in a strange way it is beautiful. You did a great job describing the pain and confusion. If this is written about current emotions, my heart goes out to you. I've been there and I know how awful it is. Great poem!