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i said the last words

I said you would not like it
you said you Did not care
and you did not care till
I said those last words
and left you standing there
you hate me
you hate me
that i can tell
really do  i care
yes i do
that feeling is mutual
i sent you to hell
you came back strong
stronger then i thought you would
so now your stronger than me
you broke your promise
that is just like you

what did you truly think ?

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