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I Miss You

The way you laugh
makes me wander across a rainbow oasis,
sending me to another world,
making me happy to no end.

The way you realize who you are,
makes me realize that I am in heaven,
just one step away from dreams coming true,
very, very possibly destiny.

The way you make me feel real,
that certain way you have of calming me,
with but a touch of my soul,
angelic caresses of my heart.

The way you sing soothes me,
brings me to the wild blue sky of romance,
carrying me to another world
with your sweet lips of strawberry wine.

The way you are brightens my life
to the point I see the light of the kingdom,
one we all want and need so desperately,
the place love goes to burn bright.


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Included in the "Magnificent" collection.
Written April 16th, 2004

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  • June 30, 2004
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    awww...this is soo sweet! That's such a sweet poem for this special person. The imagery was great, and I could almost taste everything you were saying..'sweet lips of strawberry wine" that is sooo sweet!!! I can't stop I can't wait to meet someone who makes me feel like this-hehe-great job!
    liz


  • TrinityMBS silver member
    April 16, 2004
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    oh Tim... you should know this made me cry... thank you sweetheart... I miss you too


  • ashwe91043
    April 16, 2004
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    this is very beautiful i love your wording and expression very beautiful flow and i love your descriptions very great write... keep up the good work!