~by Gregg Rowe~
I am done with the nightmares of the day
Accept my own ideology of a Higher Power
To lead me onto the trials of love
Where sweet semen tastes better than white wine
I am departing from the paths of Catholicism
To search for dreams that whet my appetite
I will trade my old acquaintances
Just to taste the tingle of a sweet youth
I will break with all my illusions
That have never mislead me in my life
I will follow my hearts calling
Its fluttering, will be my guide
I yearn to love a younger male
Though it may be unwise to do:
But the washboard chest, the tiny brown nipples
The hairless skin, uproots my long desires
To touch the blond curls of his youth, the skin so ivory smooth
The green eyes that shine in the moonlight
While clouds will warn me in dismay
My mouth waters to lap upon his dazzling white skin
I imagine he leaves the company of his young friends
Who play backgammon and chess and polo
Forgoes with glee these childish sports
To join me in an afternoon of adult games
He teases me with his wardrobe
Of button down jeans and muscle t-shirts
The youthfulness of his innocence
Is the sin that joins us as one
His qualities with his friends are masculine
And when we are alone, he becomes the woman
Sitting on me and rocking to and fro
While I wait to drink his innocence
After, we are drunk in enlightenment
I wonder how many children this young man will father
At least every time we meet for a rendezvous
It will be one less, as I divulge his characteristics
I can still taste his sweetness in the back of my throat
Look upon his glowing cheeks
His sweetness beautifies him
As I lap the last drops from his engorged meat
We cannot speak openly
About this love we have for each other
Yet, when we are together, for we not fear
The teacher, nor more importantly, the newly ordained preacher.
Author notes
Written January 7th, 2002
In a list
A contest entry
- Secret Lovers??? by Trixie08.
300 points, ended November 29, 2006, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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FEVERISH!!
Tall, thin (but very muscular!) and black...and twenty-three--so BEAUTIFUL, & so very well hung; and so impatient that he really HURTS me every time he 'cums' up into me (but I keep going back for more!!) VERY EROTIC WORK!!11111
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Wickedly Naughty
This is just so HOT! I loved the erotica and sensuality of the entire piece. It just so passionate and It shows you care alot about the person your describing in this piece. And the pic isn't bad to look at LOL!!
Great write! And thank you for entering my contest! 
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this is a very well written poem. good job and good luck
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Whoa i have to say that this work knocked me back a step or too - it's certainly not what i was expecting, but was very well written - lvoed the fact that you hadn't concentrated on making it rhyme and just let the words happen instead- this was realy well done - nice job and best of luck in the contest -y our imagery and descriptions were one heck of a visually described lot!
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wow i really like this piece, its amazing. well done
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this was a very open poem...lol...but it was in the theme of the contest so yeh...you were very explicit and open about your feelings and that is what i am looking for...im only 13 but im open minded and im not going to judge you...this is why i had the contest....thankyou for entering i appreciate it and good luck!
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Interesting topic. This actually was not a topic I was expecting, but it fits on so many ways. This, of course, wins you brownie points. I, at least, relate to the youngness issues there.
I think your word choice is good, and interesting. I cannot say I am too much of a fan of the graphic nature, but I can understnad why you have it there.
I'm surprised that I was able to keep a rhythm despite the lack of rhyme. That is an amazing feat for me. This also wins you points. Good job. Good Luck =P
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very interesting write. I don't think I can say anything that hasn't been said. I think it is especially interesting hat you were capturing the style of what whitman, but put a modern picture with it- that really does something to the brain.
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Dear lordoftherings,
My Ideal Boyfriend
Uhm, I'm very speechless, yet I want you to know how exquisite your descriptions are! They truly make the imagery stand out. Wow is about the most expressive word spilling from my mouth at the moment. Gregg, you are an amazing poet and from your words I feel that you're also a very interesting person.
By the way, before I forget...Thanks for the comment on my poem Cow Riding Froggie I was just being silly
MM
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Erotically Amazing!
This is great! I love the imagery...and the feelings. I love it! keep up the good work my friend!
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Interesting write. Not in a bad way, mind you. It is a good write! I agree with Silverarm... remarkable description!
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Very well penned--I think the best I've read of yours. Thanks a lot for entering, and best wishes in all that you do!
your cerulean dreamer,
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Amazing
An amazing write, with remarkable description and word choice. This isn't a topic I've seen tackled very often (well, okay, so far I haven't seen anything like in on AP), and you've hit the nail right on the head with your style.
A superb write. Good luck in the contest.
Oh, did I say this was amazing?
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that kid might be hot if the picture was cropped just above his eyes, but that Hair!!??? you must be kidding. INteresting poem, loved the naughty little bits, but overall i thought it was a bit boring.
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Wow. (looks at her friend, Stephanie) ...Well I liked it anyway...I guess she doesn't appreciate good erotica. (shrugs) It's a great write, Gregg. Don't pay any attention to her. (sticks her tongue out at Stephanie) Now, I will have to go read the others.
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way to goooo gregg.. you have a little of what fancy lad.. it'll do you good.. hehehehheh
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hehe well ya know, spent a year with a guy a good deal younger than me..part of me regrets it simply because I was his first love, and ..he while very sweet, just wasn't ready for the maturity level I needed in a relationship (and he did NOT look like that picture, hehe ..but i'm not shallow ) ...I do like the unordained preacher line ..hmm has an interesting meaning to me at least ...and he's yummy
his body reminds me of my boyfriends, hehe 
Very cool poem, though, I like the classic structure to it ..with the modern spin.
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I have green eyes!!! Yeah baby! But yeah, this is an interesting write. It's very good. The pic on the top got a friend of mine's attention. She says he's hot. But anyway, back to your poem. I can see why it's erotica, very descriptive and very good. Excellent job.
~>Tu Leona<~
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