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She wrote love...

Up at late night
when the moon peaks
above the mountain tops.
scattering stars against the
blue black canvas,
cold words spoken from hot mouths
tepid relationships fuel the cold
weather coming.
An addict of constant love and devotion.
She may be crazy
she may be psycho
she may be a drug addict...
but inside of her head
she's okay.

Shove a knife into her gut
twist it and make her bleed
make the life force spill
onto the cold white canvas
tell the sad morbid story.
Smear the blood against the
wall as a cry for help.

She's up late at night
when the moon peaks
above the mountain tops.
She screams against the cold
Winter night.
Staring at the stars...
as she etches this saying into her arms.
" To write love...on her arms."

Author notes

To Write Love on Her Arms is a non-profit movement dedicated to presenting hope and finding help for people struggling with depression, addiction, self-injury and suicide. TWLOHA exists to encourage, inform, inspire and also to invest directly into treatment and recovery.

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  • ChocolateCherries
    December 17, 2009
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    This was well written.


  • Jayde1
    December 11, 2009

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    great

    this has a great feel to it
    and awesome imagery..



    loved this bit

    She may be crazy
    she may be psycho
    she may be a drug addict...
    but inside of her head
    she's okay.

    nice work...keep z ink flowing


    Jayde


  • H4rd Kisses
    November 20, 2009

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    This was a very expressive and emotional write. I really liked the line "cold words spoken from hot mouths" I really feel the imagery in it. Great job, I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing!


  • blueyez
    November 13, 2009
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    I so loved this write... your words are so deep and moving!