People are easier to read
Than you think
They project themselves
But point their finger
And use the word "you"
Always "you"
They pull you in
Push you out
Pull you in and
Push you out
Everybody is right according to themselves
And everybody is wrong
According to everybody else
Who is right then?
Who is wrong?
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doesnt matter if you dont take critisism...
Please tell me what you think
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I agree with you.
Everybody is right according to themselves
And everybody is wrong
According to everybody else
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lol yeah, this is inspired by those arguments you get in with people where your core beliefs are the exact opposite and neither will even try to hear one another
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Intriguing question. Perhaps there is no right and no wrong; it's a matter of opinion. The beginning, where it talks about people projecting themselves, but saying "you," reminds me of the end of my poem entitled Funny How where it reads "And isn't it funny how the word 'you' always takes the place of word 'I'?"
There is one part about your poem that I think could be stronger: the title. It seems rather slapped on to me. I would call it something like "Projections." Something that has a little more meaning to it.
But hey, that's just my opinion. Haha. -
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yeah, i'm kind of infamous for slapping titles on poems even if they dont seem to make any sense or are vague
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