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Hush.

My-Eyes-Are-Closed

My-Mind-Is-Open


I am far away.


You can't touch me where I am,
Can't feel me, Can't hear me, Can't Hurt me.


I dwell as one who lurks in silence
Drifting out far from the border of reality--
Nothing of this moment is real,
I do not exist.

You do not exist.

You can't touch me where I am,
Can't feel me, Can't hear me, Can't Hurt me.


This quiet is all I am willing to bear,
Tranquil, Voiceless, Calm.

I do not exist.
This present is but bliss.

There is nothing left of me.

I am far away.



My

      Mind

            Is

                  Open.



My--Eyes--Are--Closed.

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  • BattleOfBlood
    November 24, 2009

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    I really like the flow and the tranquil but painful feeling of this poem.

    Its a circle, a full - beautifully painful cycle that builds us up and takes us down to the same primordial feelings of peace.

    Keep writing
    -LeFay