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A text message to me that read
“I don’t want to go out anymore”
I read it a thousand times
Just to make sure
For my eyes did not want to see
The way you had just dumped me
My heart couldn’t bear
What my eyes see
When they did stare
And at the end
“I still want to be your friend”
After 6 days I still wonder
If that message was true
My hearts breaking
Because I loved and trusted you
Im sick of leaving
Messages on your phone
I cant handle the way we
Were always together
And now you have just left,
Left me all alone
You can’t even think of anything
That I have done wrong
But what doesn’t kill me
Will only make me strong
So goodbye babe
Guess this is the end
You wont give me a second chance
To love you
So why should I be your friend?!?

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Written April 16th, 2004

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  • dragonsteel
    April 16, 2004
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    Nice poem. Strong and well written. Good rhyming scheme too. Keep it up!
    -dragonsteel...Hannah