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It's not hard

It's not hard to dream of the life beyond the door,
but this place,
here things make sense.
Out there, there is no room to think,
but here there is no need.
Here is safe.
Out there, that's where papa
broke my doll and my spirits.
I don't want out.
I'd rather forget than relive,
than live out there.

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  • Music Maniac
    November 11, 2009
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    Not bad

    I like the emotion behind it.